little snippet of prog/punk let me know what you think?

[professorlamp]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/quick drink juice test.mp3

After various uses of addictive drums It's come to a stand still with me and I need something else, so I might go out and buy S2.0 with my next paycheck...might!

But tell me anything to fix (except the harsh as fook hi-hat, I've Eq'd that to buggery and am still taking its dick on my knees )


REDONE VERSION http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/drink juiceeeeeeeeee.mp3

 

[professorlamp]

Bump.

 

[muckypup1]

The vocals sound a little loud to me, but i'm no pro haha. this sounds like it could be a pretty cool song! I want to hear more

 

[professorlamp]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/2872916/drink juiceeeeeeeeee.mp3

reworked , quieter vocals
less boom and more attack on the kick
I need to redo the earlier part of the song that's why it's not in the clip before you ask
And i added a longer sample clip for muckypup <3