Looking for help and opinions

[thaimcgrath]

Hey guys, something about my mix makes it seem slightly empty to me and it also seems to lack 'air'. What do you guys think, how should I go about fixing this? Any help would be great!

https://soundcloud.com/darkbind99/test

 

[thaimcgrath]

bump

 

[RedDog]

How you gonna bump after fifteen minutes?

Also the clip is annoyingly short and SC's encoding is shit, I could go on.

The mix is very center congested, you should probably clear out some space to let the kick hit harder and guitars widen up. Also those samples aren't doing you any good, especially not the overheads. Get some room ambience on the kit and watch what your guitars are doing to the presence range, there's some masking that is smearing the pick attack quite a bit.