Lost to Apathy vocal cover

[zenki312]

Hello! Im 16 years old from the Philippines. I made this vocal cover 3 months ago. I've been doing false chord screaming for 4 years. I encourage criticism since that would make me better.

 

[Villain]

I've heard (much) worse. If you want to sound more like Stanne, you might try to get a bit meaner at the end of every word or line. Mikael puts a lot of effort at the end of every growl, expressing anger / sadness / frustration / whatever he desires in a very peculiar way - in comparison you sound like you are getting bored. I hope you get what I'm saying.

-Villain

 

[zenki312]

Thanks!! I'll do a cover using that kind of technique