Melodic deathcore (with Born of Osiris like keys :P)

[Folkrav]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/6505151/CalltoArms/Bloodshed by Reality/FINAL/Obliterated Centuries.mp3

This is a new song from my band, this is the final mix for our upcoming "Rise of the Wretched" EP (coming at the end of July). I have a band to record soon, just give me some input on what I could improve OVERALL. I will not be able to change anything from now on on this, but I'd like some feedback.

That is a kind of melodic deathcore with some Born of Osiris-like keys on some parts.

Thanks a lot!

 

[Redline4]

Great improvement since the very first clip you posted. Stoked to hear the other songs. Thumbs up : great vocals, nice lead tone. Thumbs down : Left guitar a bit louder and guitars a tad ''muddy''. Btw I really like it song-wise

 

[AllanD]

Clipping in the intro, and the drums sound extremely extremely fake, try to humanize it a bit.