Mesa Dual rect, Orange 4x12v30s,real drums, My Bands New song !!

[Brady k]

hey guys ,,
this is my first real recording and mix done all by myself,,

i don't have the best snare sample ,, but i still like the sound of this mix

if you guys have some construcive critisism,
that would be great ,,

The Song is called SUSPENDED DEATH ,

here is the link
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=815917

 

[MetalDetector]

It sounds pretty good. The only thing that stands out to me is the panning of the toms. Seems like they are too far to their respective sides. Maybe try panning them in a little closer to center. I agree the snare needs something. Maybe a little more crack. It sounds a little too loose for this genre.

 

[punkrockacademyfightsong]

HOLY COW!!! that kick is clipping everything!
there's no bass I understand? I guess you're gonna have a nice struggle in the low end with the kick like this.
anyhow, the guitartone is pretty cool
the snare can use some more snare bottom mic.
the kick could maybe pitched up 1 or 2 semitones is you ask me, but perhaps that's better to fiddle with when you have the bass recorded