Metalcore Test

[Matt.CL]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8245098/Mtest1.mp3

this is my first thread and like my 5th mix ever and i worked 3 days on it.
just a quick riff led into a breakdown thingy, i'm really
trying to improve my guitar tone idk if this is ok and what you
would change
Tell me what i did wrong and how you would fix it
i used SD2 drums and Pod xt for guitars.

 

[tylerrr]

the kick sounds slightly weak. seems like the pitch might be a little too low for the mix and/or could use a 1.5k-3.5 boost depending on how low it's tuned. the cymbals are too wide and too thin imo. I think lowering the cymbal volume will bring out the guitars better. the guitars are kind of fizzy but that's probably just a little too much gain. I like the bass tone! hope this helps!