metalfoundry plus ampsims 'n shit

I think the drums are too loud for a start - it is making it difficult to hear the guitar tones and the riffs.

The tones seem pretty good for this style though. If you're having difficulty with bass tones, try some of the stuff by ACMEBARGIG. JohhnyMcfly off these forums makes that stuff I think and his amp sims are great.

Cool riffs and songwriting too. :)