Mix criticism.

[3tuxedo]

hey guys id love some criticism on this. there is no bass yet, because i don't own one. anything would be awesome im trying to soak up as much as i can. thank you guys.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23016439/ess.mp3

 

[Goodfellas453]

the kick is kinda buried beneath the guitar a lil too much, should be more in your face, when you track bass, get rid of the low end on your guitar a lil bit

 

[gotet10]

you should try to put just some midi bass on it and mix it that way. The low end of the guitars sounds cool now without bass but you're definitely going to have to change it with bass added.