Modern death metal i mixed. Need feedback, guys! (SSD, Revalver)

[sh2]

here it is:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1955732/DG/track_01.mp3

Some people liked it, some said this is unprofessional crap.
I have no idea how to improve it.
What do you think?

NEW VERSION: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1955732/DG/track_01_03_01.mp3

 

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Guitars are way too upfront and sound really weird. Drums are almost completely buried.

 

[Erik Monsonis]

Guitars are way too upfront and sound really weird. Drums are almost completely buried.

This

 

[Sam Bottner]

yeah turn the guitars down a ton

 

[sh2]

I made new version.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1955732/DG/track_01_03_01.mp3
Does it sound better?