My first attempt at some vocals! (Cobra+Metal Foundry)

[chrism3006]

Hey guys just thought I'd share this:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1681257/Metal Foundry Test 2.mp3

Its my first serious attempt at doing some vocals for my own material, I think it sounds alright but I fucked my throat Need to work on that

The guitars are Framus Cobra through my Blackstar cab.

Drums is my first ever time messing around with metal foundry and it still needs some work, but I think it sounds alright.

Bass is podfarm into Ampeg.

What do you guys think?

EDIT: I tried to get a bit more seperation between everything, I used a slight stereo enhancer on the guitars and I think it sounds pretty good:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/1681257/Metal Foundry Test 3.mp3

 

[zirkonflex]

Muhahaha, very distinctive style with the highs, but the lows are quite nice.
Guitars and drums are good, the entire thing is probalbly a bit scooped.