My first Recordings

[MLink]

Hi guys. I finished my very first recordings and thought I could share them to recieve some reviews or smth.

I hope you enjoy my stuff!





best wishes from Germany!!

-Martin

 

[goddessmusic]

Not my kind of music, but it sounds good for being your first recordings. The recordings are a bit muddy, and they need a little edge/sharpness. What are you mastering with?

 

[joshinthesilence]

Hey bro, Josh from In the Silence here. I'm really digging all the metal riffs here bud! It sounds great, and very solid playing. My only critique at all is the clean chord progression at the beginning is a little predictable, so if you wanted to change it up you could try some chord inversions or something, and like godessmusic says a little muddy sounding, but once you got going on the metal, I was totally into it man. It rocks! You're a good player, you need a band! There seem to be a lot of talented fuckers posting on here. Keep it up!