Need alot of Criticism for my mix

[yawp666]

I've only been mixing/recording for a good 6-8 months so i'm still pretty noob and It would definitely be appreciated if i could gets some tips, advice, criticism on this mix! Thanks guys

http://soundcloud.com/ronnymarks/through-autum-leaves

 

[jherman]

Really like the composition on this one. Gonna go out on a limb and guess there is no bass guitar, which would lead me to the next obvious statement: there's no real low end to any of the instruments that i can tell. Very good for an early production. I hear a lot of synth work in there, try going through and adding some Root notes in a lower synth that follow the guitar.

 

[andrewl913]

^ +1 the loudness is not there at all... is there a hpf at like 10khz haha jk.. i love the mix and the music. feels wicked 80's! .. but its miss low end on drums and no bass at all. my subwoofer is not pumping at all.

 

[yawp666]

Their is bass on it it's just pretty fucking quiet and i geuss the fact that the low end isn't really there doesn't help. and Thank you guys I knew their was something obvious that it was lacking but i just couldn't figure it out. and as for the volume I geuss I've just been mixing really quietly because when ever i bounce my songs to listen in different environments (mainly my laptop which has shitty speakers (stupid place to judge i know) it sounds shittier. But I'll definitely put some more Low end on their and try and raise the volume more
Thanks again guys!

 

[yawp666]

http://soundcloud.com/ronnymarks/through-autum-leaves-mix-2
ok heres round two let me know what you guys think. Still havn't really adjusted the volume issue to much. Mainly bottom end stuff

 

[Binary Encoded Sunset]

The guitars could use some more mids, i find the tone a bit sharp n' scratchy to my ears. Taste perhaps. Nice song, reminds me of a band called Skyfire. Just give the guitars some third dimension.

 

[andrewl913]

upload the stems i want to have a go at it if you dont mind