- Jan 21, 2010
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One of my band's new songs, tell me what needs work!
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/Feb 18 - FINAL 1.mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/Feb 18 - FINAL 1.mp3
Need crit for a mix we're using on a compilation CD asap
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HOLY CRAP!!!! Sounds so pissed off. Hahaha.
0:00-0:24- In my opinion the guitars could have more bite to them like just a bit more treble
1:52- I hear this riff and think of huge hair windmills and I wish it repeated twice again for a smoother transition into the "two step part"
1:58- That build up into the I guess "two step part" could be more pronounced
2:35- Whats the significance of the drip drip gunshot?
2:39- left channel there's a guitar ringing out like a buzz
2:40- that solo could be brought down a bit I feel it's competing to much with the vocals.
Throughout the song the drums get drowned out then brought back in the back out and I feel that makes the drums lose their power and in the left channel there's this splishy splash hi hat sound I'm not to fond of.
I feel the vocals could have a bit of grit to cut through the mix. Something about them makes them not stand out as much as they should.
This of course is all my opinion.
0:00-0:24- In my opinion the guitars could have more bite to them like just a bit more treble
1:52- I hear this riff and think of huge hair windmills and I wish it repeated twice again for a smoother transition into the "two step part"
1:58- That build up into the I guess "two step part" could be more pronounced
2:35- Whats the significance of the drip drip gunshot?
2:39- left channel there's a guitar ringing out like a buzz
2:40- that solo could be brought down a bit I feel it's competing to much with the vocals.
Throughout the song the drums get drowned out then brought back in the back out and I feel that makes the drums lose their power and in the left channel there's this splishy splash hi hat sound I'm not to fond of.
I feel the vocals could have a bit of grit to cut through the mix. Something about them makes them not stand out as much as they should.
This of course is all my opinion.
- Jan 21, 2010
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Anddd here's another shot at mastering it, with a few changes regarding drums. Yeah, the bass drops are retarded loud but our vocalist said "the kids will love it" so I was like fuck it and went with it. Hopefully the vocals cut a little bit in this, too.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/FEB 18 FINAL 2.mp3
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/FEB 18 FINAL 2.mp3
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