Need some help with my best mix so far!!

[sh2]

Here it is:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1955732/01.mp3

It sounds nice to me, but looks like something goes wrong here, and the mix could be better.
Got any ideas??

UPDATED
Here is my final mix:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1955732/02.mp3

 

[fuge86]

I think its nearly perfect! I can't point to anything

 

[kramer1309]

Distorted guitars sound a liiiitle bit mid heavy, smoothen those.
Thats about all, pretty great otherwise..

 

[ahjteam]

how about less apparent autotune?

 

[binaryblueprint]

Hello friend. try going through and humanizing the midi for the drums a touch. they sound toooo perfect. my opinion of course.

 

[forrestman]

Great song but way too loud, i hear no heavy bass.. yeah the bassdrum is
there but the bass instrument is like gone? or i have something like an
earproblem

I can put the volume on 8a clock and i hear too much loudness that's not
pleasant too the ear, back down some high's or mid's or maybe it's the
plugins in the master section, don't now

Also make more room for the bass.

For the rest nice song.. like it

 

[sh2]

I think its nearly perfect! I can't point to anything

thanx man!))

how about less apparent autotune?

yes, i just throw it on vox channel and forgot to tune it)) i will fix it.

Hello friend. try going through and humanizing the midi for the drums a touch. they sound toooo perfect. my opinion of course.

true, snare needs A LOT of velocity work.

Great song but way too loud, i hear no heavy bass.. yeah the bassdrum is
there but the bass instrument is like gone?

I have the same feeling.


Thanx to all your replies, guys!!! I will post fixed mix soon!

 

[AerialThesis]

I can hear clipping at some parts, the song doesn't need to be that loud anyways. It would really benefit from a less static bass content and would punch way fucking more! This clip would make a good myspace version tought.

 

[sh2]

Well i guess it`s my final mix:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1955732/02.mp3

 

[YanikT]

I think the drum is too thin in the panorama, I would like it a bit wider but that's a matter of taste

 

[YanikT]

Cymbals are more wide but I was pointing at toms

 

[sh2]

honestly, i was thinking about that. Toms panned right, but drummer uses only two of them. I`ll try to pan it wide. Thanks for idea!)