Need some opinions on these death metal vocals.. (clip)

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What do you think overall?

http://mysite.verizon.net/jfrickinp/exafro.mp3

I appreciate it!

 

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"Reduced to torsos who are missing their heads!"

Also, "they died for me, they died for you, you show me yours, I'll show you mine?"

Um, lyrics aside, sounds pretty professional.

 

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I believe it's a knife for me a knife for you... etc.

 

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Ah. Still. Funny.

 

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Ah. Still. Funny.

Haha, I think funny was the point, with the diarrhea of the gods and all

 

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No kidding.

 

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harsh

 

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...?

btw I forsee this thread being moved or re-moved, just so ya know.