Need some opinions on this one here...

[hks350d]

Can someone give me some pro tips here on what it sounds like is wrong?

I realize I'm clipping on my mastering but there's just something about the mix that sounds not right as far as frequencies go.

You with the golden ears, listen to this.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/11232680/DAEINTRO3.mp3

 

[zver]

take the mastering again and post it after so we can hear whats happening.here lot of the freq. are distorted