- May 27, 2010
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Hey guys! I have an instrumental prog metal band and recently I found myself wanting to write something with vocals... problem is, I have no idea who's going to actually sing. This would probably be just one song (I really want to have at least ONE song with vocals!) and just for fun.
I was wondering if anyone here would like to give it a shot. I uploaded a small clip of the first verses and pre-chorus or whatever. The song isn't finished and it will probably be something like Dream Theater's A Nightmare to Remember, In The Presences of Enemies, etc. (yeah right)
The lyrics are cheesy as hell and definitely not final... just try something melodic (without following the piano though!) but feel free to sing it as you please.
Any help would be extremely appreciated and I'm looking forward to your clips!
Here are the lyrics (starting at 0:02 and all the way to the end of the clip, with a small pause when the distorted guitars come in)
As I lay
Deep in thought
I Watch the clouds
Their eternal dance
Unfulfilled dreams
Shatter my mind
Visions of life
Of times gone by
This world doesn't care
Who's left behind
A child, a name
That bears no lies
An existence with no regrets
Cut her open to ease your pain
Thanks a lot!
http://www.esnips.com/webfolder/ff8b3ccf-195f-4949-918d-4d963ac0b7d0
http://uploading.com/files/528f6mb3/Vocal+search%21.mp3/
PS: Of course, this is an unmixed, extremely raw version of what the song will be. :Smokedev:
PS II: I wouldn't mind some growling backing vocals somewhere in there!
I was wondering if anyone here would like to give it a shot. I uploaded a small clip of the first verses and pre-chorus or whatever. The song isn't finished and it will probably be something like Dream Theater's A Nightmare to Remember, In The Presences of Enemies, etc. (yeah right)
The lyrics are cheesy as hell and definitely not final... just try something melodic (without following the piano though!) but feel free to sing it as you please.
Any help would be extremely appreciated and I'm looking forward to your clips!
Here are the lyrics (starting at 0:02 and all the way to the end of the clip, with a small pause when the distorted guitars come in)
As I lay
Deep in thought
I Watch the clouds
Their eternal dance
Unfulfilled dreams
Shatter my mind
Visions of life
Of times gone by
This world doesn't care
Who's left behind
A child, a name
That bears no lies
An existence with no regrets
Cut her open to ease your pain
Thanks a lot!
http://www.esnips.com/webfolder/ff8b3ccf-195f-4949-918d-4d963ac0b7d0
http://uploading.com/files/528f6mb3/Vocal+search%21.mp3/
PS: Of course, this is an unmixed, extremely raw version of what the song will be. :Smokedev:
PS II: I wouldn't mind some growling backing vocals somewhere in there!