Not bad for a high school band. Vocalist isn't bad, but fuckin hell the vocal lines are terrible and the lyrics are shit. Riffs have a melodic death influence. Also, change your name man.. Evoking Evisceration?! Seriously??
edit: Sorry one more thing, the pinch harmonics are super irritating
I've got a good idea for you guys: Speed the song up by like 20-30 bpm, and tell the drummer to double time the verse riff, so that he's not hitting the snare on the crotchets: 1,
2, 3,
4, but tell him to play triplet quavers (or what the Yanks call '8th notes') hitting the snare like this 1,
2, 3,
1, 2,
3, 1,
2, 3,
1, 2,
3
Perhaps if Johnny C sees this, he will translate this to drumming terminology - (damn guitarist speak lol)
I'm talkin just about the maiden-like verse riff, which is the best of the song and you should just base the entire song on similar riffs. I.e. less metalcore 'breakdowns' and more straight up metal.
