http://storywrite.com/Story/1689046
i know i haven't whored my writing out on here in forever, and i haven't gotten much commentary on this story and i'm kinda proud of this one for some reason ... it's really simple, actually, but i'm good with simple. i've found that my writing style is usually too pretentious to maintain steam past several pages, and my character development is general suckdom so ... longer stories don't work well right now. uhh ... constructive criticsm is encouraged and you just get my eternal love for checking out my writing.
i know i haven't whored my writing out on here in forever, and i haven't gotten much commentary on this story and i'm kinda proud of this one for some reason ... it's really simple, actually, but i'm good with simple. i've found that my writing style is usually too pretentious to maintain steam past several pages, and my character development is general suckdom so ... longer stories don't work well right now. uhh ... constructive criticsm is encouraged and you just get my eternal love for checking out my writing.