New Ten Minute Epic......

[wyllie]

its called Diffusion of an Illusion, Theres another couple of songs up so any comments would be decent

-wyllie


*forgot to mention where they are! lol www.soundclick.com/suffertheseason

 

[KeithRT99]

the guitar tone is really weak/thin sounding. Kinda brittle and fizzy. The snare could use some low end smack. the mix overall is alittle light on the low-end in general. The clean tremelo guitars are really quiet. Is there bass there? i think i heard it, it should be louder, or just have more low end. the kick is fine though.

i think low end is an issue.

 

[Black neon bob]

Cool stuff man...

Few points to work on:

Bass is in there.. but so low iin the mix, or it has the same characteristics as the guitar sound, either way, it get's lost waaay too much in the mix.. turn it up, EQ it a bit different and see how that works.

guitar tone.. Keith said it, it's too fizzy for my liking as well, making it sound thin that way, try adding some mid-low and cut some of that fizz out for sure.. see how that works in the mix.
Listen to the second part of the song, the guitars allready sound better on that part.