Nice poem
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dargormudshark
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zakk_hate_me_666 said:
not just Romeo, Thomas Youngblood, Tuomas Holopainen, and maybe even Dani Filth
OMGWTFBBQ~
This is almost an exact exermpt from one of Romeo's songs lol
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I will devise from perfect skies
A dark and vengeful day
Faith and mercy gone astray
With strength of infinite measures
The mighty sword divides order
From chaos in the Kingdom below
And from the mansions of glory
This empty soul cries out one
Final plea...
The end has begun...
Our world collide now in disguise
You'll fell the wrath, un divine
Tears of sorrow fall from my sky
Eternal is my pain ......
I can't escape this captive misery
Heart stone cold, under supremacy
Thrown into a raging sea
(Eternal is the pain that leads me to damnation)
_ You'll pay for your deeds
Destroyed in agony
Innocence fading away
The knife of death will carve your fate
For this living hell I endure..
I condemn thee to the cold hands of doom
The gates of hell.......
"Abandon all hope all ye who enters here"
...Standing on the edge of paradise
I sacrifice my truth and loyalty
Seven deadly sins consume you...all but a dance with death
Eve of destruction ...impeding doom from shore to shore.
Alone I walk, among the twisting shadows
Temped by ancient magic, the power of five
My desire to destroy
And I would give you my soul...my soul
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Might I quote the site "At the time of this submission (May 2003), Kristen was a student at Lunenburg (Massachusetts) High School. Her talent was discovered by Robin Monaco, our graphic artist, in her work at the school."
Emphasize the words 'HER TALENT' and the year '2003' This girl is a con-artist at its best! Like aleight understandable if it was changed a bit, or even if she said she took from other artists... BUT THIS IS TOTAL BS! Romeo, should whip out his guitar start shredding so hard that this bitchs ears melt! Than he should pull out his trusty symphonic LightSaber and pull some Episode III shit on her!
This is almost an exact exermpt from one of Romeo's songs lol
---------------------
I will devise from perfect skies
A dark and vengeful day
Faith and mercy gone astray
With strength of infinite measures
The mighty sword divides order
From chaos in the Kingdom below
And from the mansions of glory
This empty soul cries out one
Final plea...
The end has begun...
Our world collide now in disguise
You'll fell the wrath, un divine
Tears of sorrow fall from my sky
Eternal is my pain ......
I can't escape this captive misery
Heart stone cold, under supremacy
Thrown into a raging sea
(Eternal is the pain that leads me to damnation)
_ You'll pay for your deeds
Destroyed in agony
Innocence fading away
The knife of death will carve your fate
For this living hell I endure..
I condemn thee to the cold hands of doom
The gates of hell.......
"Abandon all hope all ye who enters here"
...Standing on the edge of paradise
I sacrifice my truth and loyalty
Seven deadly sins consume you...all but a dance with death
Eve of destruction ...impeding doom from shore to shore.
Alone I walk, among the twisting shadows
Temped by ancient magic, the power of five
My desire to destroy
And I would give you my soul...my soul
------------------------
Might I quote the site "At the time of this submission (May 2003), Kristen was a student at Lunenburg (Massachusetts) High School. Her talent was discovered by Robin Monaco, our graphic artist, in her work at the school."
Emphasize the words 'HER TALENT' and the year '2003' This girl is a con-artist at its best! Like aleight understandable if it was changed a bit, or even if she said she took from other artists... BUT THIS IS TOTAL BS! Romeo, should whip out his guitar start shredding so hard that this bitchs ears melt! Than he should pull out his trusty symphonic LightSaber and pull some Episode III shit on her!
Luis
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soundgarden
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OFF WITH HER HEAD!!!!!
Don't worry guys, if she gets famous for this then her downfall will be so much greater and pleasuring for us
and Kamelot does indeed rule!
Don't worry guys, if she gets famous for this then her downfall will be so much greater and pleasuring for us
and Kamelot does indeed rule!
Fuck this bitch. And I just tried to go back to that site a few minutes ago, and her page is down now. Maybe someone emailed the webmaster?
Medusa's eyes
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I wanted to check out the link, but indeed it didn't work (anymore).
I would have loved to read it, so I could have some fun. lmao "Her talent was discovered" I don't know if I have to laugh or to cry! Or both!
I would have loved to read it, so I could have some fun. lmao "Her talent was discovered" I don't know if I have to laugh or to cry! Or both!
I found that page when I inputted one of Bird Serpent War's verses into Google. It was the first hit.
Here's the page on google's cache:
http://216.239.59.104/search?q=cach...shing,+tearing+down+your+dreams&hl=fi&start=1
Here's the page on google's cache:
http://216.239.59.104/search?q=cach...shing,+tearing+down+your+dreams&hl=fi&start=1
personally, i rather like these poems better...
"Here i sit, same as ever
took a dump, pulled the lever.
The toilet clogged, the water flowed
Look out world, its a mother load!" -Beavis & Butthead
"Roses are red, violets are blue
most poems rhyme, but this one doesnt" -some away message on AIM
incase u cant take a hint worth a dry cat's crap, i dont do poetry. the only thing i like to write is music. i let the keyboard player or whoever else write the lyrics. not saying that poetry sucks, tho. well that chick's does, cuz 1.) its not even her's and 2.) if she ever did write something it would suck & blow @ the same time.
"Here i sit, same as ever
took a dump, pulled the lever.
The toilet clogged, the water flowed
Look out world, its a mother load!" -Beavis & Butthead
"Roses are red, violets are blue
most poems rhyme, but this one doesnt" -some away message on AIM
incase u cant take a hint worth a dry cat's crap, i dont do poetry. the only thing i like to write is music. i let the keyboard player or whoever else write the lyrics. not saying that poetry sucks, tho. well that chick's does, cuz 1.) its not even her's and 2.) if she ever did write something it would suck & blow @ the same time.
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