Not too metalish song, but i need feedback plz!

[Key_maker]

Hi there!

I made a song for a competition for the riffworks just using the demo version and the demo version of the guitar rig 3. I also used my RGA121 with 81tw and 89.

this is the song:

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1057412/intergalactic6.mp3

Have a nice day!