Ok. Here's the vocals pt 2

i don't think that the mp3 has enough quality to perceive...but the voc is ok.
 
to be honest the vocals don't sound that good (maybe it's the lack of good quality of the recording)there's not enough emotion/vocal variation so I give it a 4 but don't give up, recordings like this are often misleading. Work harder, there are some good websites that can help you improve your range and there for emotion.