Onions please! (metal content)

[LOL]

This is something I'm working on, I know it's a bit sloppy in parts, I'll fix that later.

What I want to know is if I'm moving in the right direction.

Let me know what you guys think!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/477818/02 Faults.mp3

ALSO: Try to guess the guitar tone, or signal chain if you think ya can

 

[Revson]

I can't give you onions on the interwebs.....

Sounds pretty good, but the guitars seem way too boomy.

 

[drope934]

I don't like the snare, and the vocal is a bit too burried in the mix maybe?

 

[Brett - K A L I S I A]

(sorry, had to)

 

[Uros]

^^Add this to that, and it's solved

 

[LOL]

I'll fix the mixing and mastering, I just wanna know if the song itself is any good lol