opinions on a mix please

Sounds pretty nice, dude! Two things come to mind, though. The guitars sound a bit thin - they could use some more mids, maybe around 600Hz or so. Not much, just enough to give the tone a bit more body. Also, the kick stands out a bit too much for my liking, you could try to lower it's volume a bit and EQ some of the high end 'tick' out of it. Just my two cents :)

Good job!
 
That sounds freakin bad dude! I understand what the others are saying about the attack on the kick, and clipping, and not hearing the guitars enough. I bet if you bring down the "click" of the kick drums, that could help bring out the guitars. I would also recomend putting a good highpass filter on the guitars around 100 - 120 hz (depending on how low they are tuned), then from there you can determine if you need more mids in the guitars or not (which is probably still not a bad idea).