Opinions on mix (Axe fx, Randall XL cab)

[Artean]

Cheers!

Would be valuable for an amateur as me to get some of your opinions on my mix. So, please, bomb away!

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4065951/End%20Assembly.mp3

 

[Revson]

Those overheads sound like white noise, especially once the hihat gets going. The guitars are burying the drums quite a bit and are dominating the mix so bring those down a little. Add some more high-end to the kick and up the volume a couple dB because it gets lost really easily. Other than that it's not too shabby but that's my opinion, others may think differently.

 

[Artean]

Thanks for the comment. Just tried the mix on my shitty comp speakers at work; the Ohs certainly does not sound very pleasing. The kick could use some more click to it as well. Back to tweaking!