opinions on my newest mix?

[jessman24]

http://soundcloud.com/sixreasonstorun/test-test-test-2

 

[S1770]

Hi Jessman Keep working on your mix Man
this reference track is a partial Segment of your track above reworked

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/81719608/temp/Reference jesse24.mp3

Hope this helps to for you to continue to build your mix Technique

S1770

 

[jessman24]

Hey man thanks so much for the reply! Please tell me exactly what you did to thay segment it sounds great

 

[Ascendant]

Your guitar tone is a bit weak and muddy, bass guitar could be more present. Drums sound ok, but I can hardly hear the toms. Snare is a little boxy, cut some low mids.

Hi Jessman Keep working on your mix Man
this reference track is a partial Segment of your track above reworked

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/81719608/temp/Reference jesse24.mp3

Sounds scooped and harsh imo, very hi-fi sounding. It's different from the original but not necessarily better...

 

[jessman24]

I have been having a hard time with guitar tone what would u recomend I change with it?