please comment my mix&master

[metallopesante]

I'm trying to self produce a demo, low budget.
Link is at the bottom of this post.

I play both guitars and the bass.
Drum is programmed using samples.

Please note that it's a very simple "2 notes" riff that I'm using as "test track".
It's the same loop repeated for the entire file, so don't criticize the songwriting because
this file has not a "songwriting"; It's only a dummy file.
Bass starts alone then other instruments join in.

I would like some comments about: mix/master/guitar/bass/drum/tips/tricks etc..

please note:
the main question is NOT if this the best production ever
but, rather, if it is ACCEPTABLE...
So I would like if tell me if you find "big" lacks/errors in the sound aspect
or if you find it decent.
:Spin:

Thanks in advance, and sorry for my bad english.

link:http://soundcloud.com/user346045502/mixmaster

 

[bryan_kilco]

But seriously, it does need some work. It's not totally bad considering you are a beginner I'm assuming.

 

[metallopesante]

Are you talking about the sound of a specific instrument or about the "global sound"?