Poetry Thread

[Luis]

I think it is a good idea, to write our poems and to interchange ideas about them. Please try to explain a little bit about your poem and tell us why did you wrote it.

Being the person who created this thread, im the first one to post my poem.

When i wrote this poem, i was dreaming with the girl who i love...however one day all of us will die. The poem its called RIP​

RIP​

The funeral has begun​

"Let this soul to find some love"​

Now, you rest in peace​

And i can only offer you my tears.​

Your face look so tired​

Becouse you gave me your life​

The birds sing to you a beutiful piece​

While i give you the last kiss.​

Since the first time i held you hand​

I knew you were the one...to made me smile​

Dressed in white you changed my nights​

Now, your black veil rejects my eyes.​

Dont be afraid, and find your way​

"Let the sky guide you towards light"​

I will think of you as ling as i live​

Soon, ill be with you...​

 

[Orion Crystal Ice]

I thought that we were innocent.



It's 2 A.M.
There's no more rain to fall
I wake up in a sweat
Sleeping silence awakens me to ....

!
Was that
No..
The sound of the light
Could scare us both away
I slowly turn my ear to hear
The rustle, in the brush
And echo through the green
But all green is soilent, tonight


In the center
Right outside the window
Where tears are streaming down, in place of rain...........


SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I shudder to think
But all thoughts are frozen
Just outside, in the thorny bush
The moaning...

Bleeding, beetling symphony, eyes that cannot see
Cursing the world around

A tortured child
Condemned to live?

Screams of agony, tears of ebony
As black as what it hides....


NOT MOVED A MUSCLE
I am strapped down, from the fear
A requiem for the dead
I've been invited.....concerto


THE ANGUISH


The wind howls deep
Avoids the shadow, as if it knew
A "rat, tat, tat" on the pane
Silhouette of goo..


The noises are still alive
They say: "abuse, hate and torture
Nightmares of which..you've never seen!"

SO LOUD


What have I to do with this?
To listen against my will.........
Hearing "every promise, love, all broken"
Ripped from astral flesh

I don't look outside, I can't look outside
I take in from the damned..
I feel the beating, hear the screaming, taste the hot oil burning, seething
"We've shared a Fate"

You've come to me for..what?
What was stripped away - is it love?
"you can't take away
what was never placed, there!!!!"

I don't know what to do
I can't help you, who you are?
"you offer hurt and shame
you're all the same, all the same
I can't stop screaming, DO YOU HEAR ME YES YOU HEAR ME
YOU IGNORE ME
YOU CAN'T FEEL
NEVER FEEL..."

"YOU DON'T CARE, SO YOU MOVE ON
AND I'LL BE GONE, AND WE'LL BE GONE"


I have to search inside
If there's more than meets the mind....

A messenger from Hell?
Or just an escapee..
I must pay
Pay for it's pain


Trembling

I wait


Waiting for the glass to break
And my reality, shattered..

 

[Timmeth]

Here's one of mine...

Infrasonic

Below audio
Lay a sound so fragile
With anything more than a whisper
It vanishes…

A delicate whisper shattered in the air
A deaf scream, a silent symbol
Murderous whispers of solemnity
An echo, a single causality
A scream from a reality

Lower than the ear can hear
Not a sound, not even a whisper
A silent scream, the infrasonic dream

A deafening whisper
Silencing a melody
Which had been ensnared
In a brittle thought
A silenced melody

A delicate whisper shattered within air
A deaf scream, a silent symbol
Murderous whispers of solemnity
An echo, a single causality
A scream from a reality

…Below an audio
Lay a sound so fragile
With anything more than a whisper
Vanished!

 

[thisistheendeh]

nice poems. poetry is awesome! i'm a terible writer but my friend writes some nice stuff. how i wish i was a good writer. oh well, eh?