drums sound weird.. kick especially.. from a pop song i expect big roomy drums.. if u get the drums bigger, and bring the bass more to the front, it'll sound good.. man i wish i could record some stuff like this.. what's the band? i dig it.
Edit: Any chance of getting some raw tracks for mixing practice?
Yeah get rid of all the high end in that kick or better still use a completely different sample. Add some reverb or more room to the snare and put it further back in the mix. Band sounds great.
I like it. I'd probably EQ the kick a bit like the other guys said. For this genre... I'd most likely autotune those vocals a bit. Not like T-Pain... more like every radio artist.