probably my best work

Fix the cymbal at 0:38
It's some weird cut in it... or is that made on purpose? doesn't sound good if so..

EDIT: there's one more at 1:38
...and 2:05
...and 3:31

i really hope you aren't using them on purpose :D
 
The snare is faint in the mix, hard to hear it.
How are the harp like guitar overdubs done?
 
ha just a really thin brittle amp sound with reverb and delay. i believe i used the orange amp in podfarm with a tube screamer. the gain was turned up but its still an undergained sound. and ill make it a little louder. anything else?