Rate my guitar tone... (metal improv) HAS GUITAR AS BASS

[Zero Recordings]

Hey guys I just improved something on the guitar and recorded it. Tell me what you think, quality-wise & production. (oh and i know i fucked up on some 'silent' parts
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19744879/llookatthis.mp3
imo it sounds tight.
I used two guitars panned left and right...
then used another guitar as a bass! haha sounds weird, but works for now.

 

[oroinvictus]

Sounds very overgained and boxy. The 3rd track substituting as a bass doesn't help either.