Rate My Mix (Hardcore)

[Kyuss789]

Would like to know how this mix sounds to everyone else and tips or any would be amazing.

I did not track this song so some of the guitar part are out of time. but I did tempo map the whole song and write the drums into superior drummer .I did keep the OHs tho because i really do not like the superior drummer ohs at all so this was a real treat, they also needed some time stretching the line up with the replace drums.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8511207/Oceans%20Mastered%202.mp3

Feed Back PLEASE!!!!!!

 

[oroinvictus]

The guitars sound reeeeally scooped and airy. The drums are also very thin and dry.

 

[Kyuss789]

any tips on how to fix that??? coz all mixes get the thin tag lol ...are the levels of everything ok ??