Rate my song/mix

[benjy]

Hey all, I would like to get some feedback on this song I just finished working on. The project is called The God We Create. I just wanted to get some feedback from you guys.
Thanks!

http://soundcloud.com/the-god-we-create

 

[benjy]

Does anybody have anything to say?

 

[benjy]

I would really appreciate some constructive criticism.