Rate the mix please | Metal(core??)

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Hi !

I recorded a song and i think my ears are a bit sick of it from hearing it a thousand times

What do you think about the mix ?

http://soundcloud.com/rolandboeffgen/building-brick

Thanks a lot !

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[Hollowman2209]

Sounds awesome bro, at least on my crappy speakers lol
The only thing I would do is a bit more mids/twang on the bass but that's just personal preference.

 

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Thanx man !
Yeah i had my problems with the bass, i think i recorded it too distorted