recorded a clip of a song I'm working on - feedback appreciated

[Santuzzo]

Hi,

I have been working on an instrumental ballad, I posted a clip of the main theme some weeks ago, now I tried adding a solo.
Bear in mind all of this is still in progress, not really mixed , still some sloppy playing.
For the solo I recorded a few improvised takes and then I copy and pasted the bits I liked best.


Here's the link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=945046&songID=8501988

Thanks,
Lars

 

[scorpio01169]

Why do I wanna turn the lights down low, start the fireplace, get some wine, and get naked?

 

[Santuzzo]

Why do I wanna turn the lights down low, start the fireplace, get some wine, and get naked?

I don't know ?!
Because my clip sounds like po*n music???

 

[Santuzzo]

anybody?