revalver&slate drums

[keinnkosurisugi]

A song without vocal.
Please give me advice.

and which mastering do you think is the best?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=950269

master3nlyQ10
master2:RenaissanceEQ(locut30hz&hicut16khz)-Q10(100hz+3db&1450hz-2db&2500hz-2.5db&4050hz+2db))-OxfordEQ(hishelve+3db)-L3(maxGR:15-20db)
master1:Q10(100hz+5db,2500hz-4db)-OxfordEQ(hishelve+3db)


Guitar:strat(rear pu)-TS9-I/O-(PC)-gate-L2-revalverⅡ-EQ(Q10)-L2
Bass:Trilogy-L2-ampegSVX-Cubase4EQ(200hz-6db)
Drums:S2.0
the kicks are replaced with Slate's kick10Z3.
snares with 7Z4(but a bit).

I'm Japanese, so very poor at English.Sorry.

 

[dani]

こんにちは！

どぞよろしく！

私の日本語はあまりよくないです。じゃ、

welcome!

the song is cool, but they sound quite similar, and don't seem very clear..

the kit is nice sounding! i should really get the slate samples..

sorry for my poor japanese! haha.

 

[keinnkosurisugi]

>dcdanman
Thanks for advice!
I'll try to change each guitar sounds.
(and also pans)

Your Japanese is good!
You can also say in this way though it may not be necessary;
日本語はあまり上手くないです。
まだ日本語は勉強を始めたばかりです。(I began learning Japanese recently.)
日本語は初心者です。(I'm a beginner at Japanese.)

Sorry if I make you feel bad.