Rock Ballad - How's the mix so far?

[JonathanComis]

Hey guys,

So this song is not metal at all, but I could really use some extra ears to let me know if there are any problematic areas in the mix. I'm actually using this song I wrote for my girlfriend as a part of my plan to propose to her in about a week! You can follow this link to read about my proposal idea as well as hear the song. Thanks for any and all feedback!

http://www.gearslutz.com/board/work...l-rock-ballad-im-proposing-my-girlfriend.html

-Jonathan

 

[S1770]

your Girl will be proud

Really cool tonal qaulity to your Vocal's

The Lyric content in this track is very good

no doubt the track would be very popular in main stream Pop/Rock

you have found your niche mate submitt the track to a label good luck in furture prospects

Overall your Mix is very Good , Keep writing Brother

Added that Little bit more overall Sparkle you spoke of Man

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/81719608/temp/My Angel (We Are) remaster .mp3


S1770