Rough mix review needed ...

[smy1]

I am not sure if I like this anymore ...

http://www.faderhead.com/temp/DCI_Song01_Roughdemo.mp3

It's an instrumental of a project I am currently working on.

Please give me any pointers/criticism/etc. you can come up with!

Thanks!!

 

[iekobrid]

I have no mix suggestions, but listening to it three times in a row certainly made the end of my work day fly by. Thanks!