so what do you think?

I would say that the guitar needs some stereo widening, it sounds like you have it panned straight in the middle. The vocals sound like they were recorded at a whisper. You might want to post it in the Andy Sneap subforum, they have a section for "rate my mix" they can steer you in the right direction if you're looking for recording/production tips.
 
Well i mean the music, not the mix :) plz listen and review. and no its no bass included yet.
 
To be brutally honest, the guitar playing is okay, the drums are mind numbigly repetitive. The vocals leave a bit to be desired.

Thanks for the feedback, well i am a guitarist so i totaly understand your criticts :D

But you are very right about the drums...just purcased drumkit from hell so i can program drumms direkt in pro tools insted of loops.