suggestions? axe fx 2, sturgis cymbals, like moth to flames influenced band

[birdwazo]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/27347130/mix final maybe.mp3




trying to get this song done yo, any suggestions on what to do to make it sound more pro? cammmmon dont ignore me again! i never get replies on this site

 

[Redline4]

Screams sounds a bit dry, there's a weird frequency in the bass that sticks out but I can't quite put my fingers on it. The synth in the middle is cheesy haha but that's all I can say, solid mix Frank!