Sworn In Home Studio Vocal Cover

[foundations]

just recorded my first ever screamed vocal cover. what do you guys think audio quality wise? and how do you think iv done blending it with the original track, do you think I should have left it more raw or done a bit more editing on it?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K8su7WYdWbY

 

[foundations]

anything constructive guys?

 

[phillycheese]

sounds really good to me. Your screams sounds really good.
think you could give me some feedback on my i dont do it very often but im starting to sound how i want now. oh and i recorded it with a guitar hero mic ahah
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/6181320/broken cross.mp3

 

[foundations]

hard to tell when your using a guitar hero mic but sounds like you need to put more of your diaphragm into it to give it some more guts

 

[foundations]

still looking for some real critique guys????