Tech death teaser I recorded for my friends band

[SirLucasTheGreat]

I was going to record my friends band Carcinoma, www.myspace.com/carcinomaband, and I spent about 20 minutes recording a riff of theirs in nuendo and used a default template for the eq. Tell me what areas I can improve upon if you would be ever so kind.

guitars - podxt using the angel p-ball
bass- podxt using the bass expansion brit invader
drums - Superior Drummer 2.0

CARCINOMA TEASER THAT I RECORDED ... http://www.zshare.net/audio/551820278c2eaa4d/

I did some very basic Eq, C4, and L2 in sound forge but I am extremely lacking in the mastering department.

 

[SirLucasTheGreat]

Bonjour mis amis?

 

[Morgorroth]

Sounds brutal.
But Hihat Sample at the beginning sucks.
Maybe the bass could be a bit more "grunty" but I like the tone

 

[eternally_gutted]

it sounds very good man.
could you share your guitar/bass preset?

 

[Djabthrash]

Guitars sound quite nice.

Drums are too thin/clicky.