Tell me how this mix sounds please

[Metalguitarist112]

Hi, im a beginner mixer, looking to get better. Please be honest on this, how does it sound? What sounds like it needs to be changed? And sorry the playing is sloppy.

http://soundcloud.com/triplexftw/we-bow-in-its-aura-cover

 

[Santuzzo]

Playing is very tight, but the snare is overpowering in my opinion.
I'm not a big fan of your drum sound.

 

[lanky noob]

Playing is very tight, but the snare is overpowering in my opinion.
I'm not a big fan of your drum sound.

Pretty much this, Also, the main thing I could say is when you're programming drums, particularly blastbeats, change velocities between hits, it stops the drums from sounding like a machine gun

as for the drums, the kick sounds okay, what drum software are you usingout of interest?

 

[lanky noob]

Also, is there any bass on this track? if there is I can't hear it very much so turn that up to start with