the tone sounds good, although it seems to be lacking some grit in the upper mids department (2k-3k or thereabouts). I'd bring the bass up a bit more and distort the high end of the kick drum to make the hits just a tad softer. Also, i noticed a weird thing about the drums. There seems to be something about the drums panned in the middle, and it sounds very mono. You can especially hear this right at the end of the clip. Might sound ok with speakers, but with headphones it sounds like something is stuck inside your head, check your stereo image.