This essay is my hero

[mReEtTaIlRsEkD]

http://gorillamask.net/essay.shtml

 

[Kellan]

holy shit that was fantastic

 

[Det Som Engang Var]

 

[Dead Winter]

I laughed my ass off with that one. Fake, but still funny.

 

[Rebourne]

A fucking plus!

That sums up that play pretty good actually.

 

[dreaming neon darkspot]

was that something he handed into a teacher and seriously got graded? yeah, that really strengthens my faith in the american education system...

 

[Jeff-Loomis-fan]

this cant be real now?

and still 61%???

 

[dreaming neon darkspot]

obviously that guy worked pretty hard on that paper to make it as ridiculous, but it takes people more time and effort to actually recearch and put a paper together and fail.

the grade and comments are the funniest part of the paper

 

[Enemy242]

haha fucking awesome, too bad its definately not real.

 

[Anvil]

That's quite awesome. That extra page that was bigger than the rest and had nothing on it is genius.

 

[pauloled]

yeah

btw, the image verification was 6gAY2C

 

[AsModEe]

old.

I think someone else posted this like 3 years ago.

but yeah, funny stuff

 

[derek]

The marking is surprisingly like mine.

 

[DestructoSpin]

That teachers a fucking moron for even grading that. The kid got a D-! A D- for that work of bullshit is incredible! Im not sure that teacher is fit for the education system.

 

[Burti]

Lol, old essay is old. Lol at people thinking this seriously got graded. LOL'D HARD.

 

[AsModEe]

Lol, old essay is old. Lol at people thinking this seriously got graded. LOL'D HARD.

yeah, the "teacher's" writing looks like one of a 14 years old.

 

[Kellan]

I highly doubt as well it was even graded by a real teacher, but for the sake of argument I've had some teachers with even more atrocious handwriting than I have. Which is really bad.

 

[Burti]

That's not the point, for anyone to actually believe that ANYONE, ANYONE would put a passing grade on that is... Well, there is no way to sugar coat it. Stupid.

 

[Kellan]

Annnnd that wasn't my point.

 

[Burti]

My initial point wasn't the handwriting, at all. It was the grading.