Want some constructive critism on Clean Vocal Cover
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tripkagg
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You have some great talent there man, keep that good work up man and your just gonna get better and better but you already sound good! practice & practice
take a look at my cover of "two horses" by asking alexandria, also have a cover on american but the cleans suck on that one. the screams is what im training and going for so i want some crit on that
take a look at my cover of "two horses" by asking alexandria, also have a cover on american but the cleans suck on that one. the screams is what im training and going for so i want some crit on that
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abaga129
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tripkagg: Wow! That was really sick, wish i could scream like that :O
Your clean vocals where a bit off pitch, i think you should try sing it a bit higher pitch wise, because it seemed like you were a semi note low on some parts. Your clean vocals on Not the American Average was not that bad, just work on your pitch and it will sound great soon
abaga129: Yes, I noticed i was especially off on the part after the second chorus
Your clean vocals where a bit off pitch, i think you should try sing it a bit higher pitch wise, because it seemed like you were a semi note low on some parts. Your clean vocals on Not the American Average was not that bad, just work on your pitch and it will sound great soon
abaga129: Yes, I noticed i was especially off on the part after the second chorus
tripkagg
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tripkagg: Wow! That was really sick, wish i could scream like that :O
Your clean vocals where a bit off pitch, i think you should try sing it a bit higher pitch wise, because it seemed like you were a semi note low on some parts. Your clean vocals on Not the American Average was not that bad, just work on your pitch and it will sound great soon
abaga129: Yes, I noticed i was especially off on the part after the second chorus
Thanks man! yeah i've been working on the pitch but im very new so regualar singing so its gonna take a while, the screaming is the only thing i serious practice. i wish i had your cleans, perfect fit
Thanks man! yeah i've been working on the pitch but im very new so regualar singing so its gonna take a while, the screaming is the only thing i serious practice. i wish i had your cleans, perfect fit
Hehe, we should do a dual cover sometime
I actually just started to sing a couple of weeks ago and my technique is not the best, i really have to sing super loud to reach the high notes :/
abaga129
The Apprentice
Hehe, we should do a dual cover sometime
Its natural to have to sing louder to hit the higher notes, but try opening your throat up when you do. It should make them a little smoother. But for only singing for a few weeks, its sounding really good
tripkagg
Member
Hehe, we should do a dual cover sometime
yeah i also need to sing super loud to hit those high notes but thats normal
yes we should man, would be cool
abaga129
The Apprentice
Hey guys i had a similar thread to post so i decided to just put it here.
My band kicked out our guitarist/singer, so we are in need of a singer. I thought this might be my chance to shine so i rewrote the chorus to one of our songs and recorded it. i was wondering what you guys think about my singing.
Hope everyone had a great thanksgiving!
My band kicked out our guitarist/singer, so we are in need of a singer. I thought this might be my chance to shine so i rewrote the chorus to one of our songs and recorded it. i was wondering what you guys think about my singing.
Hope everyone had a great thanksgiving!
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Hey guys i had a similar thread to post so i decided to just put it here.
My band kicked out our guitarist/singer, so we are in need of a singer. I thought this might be my chance to shine so i rewrote the chorus to one of our songs and recorded it. i was wondering what you guys think about my singing.
Hope everyone had a great thanksgiving!
We don't celebrate fat people's day in Sweden
Your vocals are not bad, i would try to sing some parts louder and maybe sing some of the notes higher to make it more exciting.
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tripkagg
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We don't celebrate fat people's day in Sweden
Your vocals are not bad, i would try to sing some parts louder and maybe sing some of the notes higher to make it more exciting.
haha this is cool, im also from Sweden but im gonna keep writing in English to keep this thread active. would be so nice for other readers if i started writing in Swedish
but hey, i tried to do a new small cover on a song by "Pierce The Veil". i just had to try and sing those high notes, please tell me what you think
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Sounds pretty nice actually, how do you do it? Because i don't assume that's your normal voice ^^
When i've tried to sing those similiar highs in King for a Day - Pierce the Veil, my voice gets really hoarse easily. I guess you should use your head voice, but im not sure if i do it right :/
When i've tried to sing those similiar highs in King for a Day - Pierce the Veil, my voice gets really hoarse easily. I guess you should use your head voice, but im not sure if i do it right :/
tripkagg
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It's alot of head voice and it's god damn hard, i try to practice as often i can but i haven't got there really yet. i have also tried King for a Day and i can only manage to hit the notes of the original singer. there is no way i can go as high as Kellin but i guess even more practice can get you there some day, please do some more cover so i can hear more of you than just 1 song!
I tried to sing some parts of the song tripkagg covered, Bulls in the Bronx. I tried to sing only with my head voice but I sound like a 10 year old girl (the original singer is a girl right? XD), what do you guys think?
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Public/bulls.wav?w=f8085c69
https://dl-web.dropbox.com/get/Public/bulls.wav?w=f8085c69
tripkagg
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i get an error when i try to open the link so i cant listen :/
HAHA the singer in the band isnt a girl, it sure is a guy
