What do you guys think about this? (Video game-ish stuff)

[Flow Of Time]

https://dl.dropbox.com/s/29o6cbx5yy4hx9u/Titlescreen.mp3

I could imagine this being played on the titlescreen of some sci-fi game
What do you guys think? Do you like it, do you like the mix?

 

[Harley Barley]

i think the guitars could come up in the mix, and i like the part with the chior/synthy bit at the end, thats the part i could really see in some sort of game or something!

 

[Flow Of Time]

Thanks for your feedback!