What do you guys think of this?

The drums sound really two dimensional and flat. Were any room mics used? If so, bring them up. Also, try using some nice room samples.

I'm not really a fan of how the guitars are edited either, but that's more of a preference thing. Aside from the lack of space going on with the drums the rest of the mix is pretty cool.
 
Drums definitely need some more space to them. Like Christian WUFU said, they sound incredibly flat. I also am not much of a fan of the way the guitars are edited. I personally don't like them because I think they have too much of a fuzzy, trebly sound. However, the lead tone was pretty cool. I think the vocals are done really well though.
 
The mix is alright. The guitars are way over edited.

This generic Metalcore breakdown thing is getting pretty old though imo. There are literally thousands of bands with this exact same sound.