What do you think of my Growl?

TheWretchedScum

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http://pages.sbcglobal.net/beefpatrol/growl/Asp Fancier.mp3

the instrumental is taken from my friends band and the original song and lyrics can be found at www.inquestmusic.com

i layered a low one with a high one for extra depth. tell me what you think.

Aspiration

Losing your skill, day by day:
Unending work has made plain
Tired of life, pittance made.
This spark fades away

Chalkboards raised you, bar code painted,
Sharpened wit with scribbled grades.
Grown man ready, view untainted,
Human weakness ends today.

[chorus]
Planning a holocaust, dark mutilation.
Venting your anger to forget the frustration.
Inevitability weakens their lies,
Hammer of justice crushes their cries.
Revenge is your horror, the silence your friend.
Let go of compassion, no more you'll pretend.
After you're finished, they'll cease to exist,
The demons you'll torture, dead of your fists.

Locked away in utter darkness,
Far away from public view.
Laughing madly, howling deeply,
Sharpened nails rip out your eyes.